Thursday, January 17, 2013

Umar bhar Ghalib, yehi bhul karta raha,
Dhool Chehre pe thi, aur main aaina saaf karta raha.
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4 comments:

  1. TanveerMarch 23, 2014 at 3:37 AM

    yeh sher ghalib ka nahi hai...

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    1. puneetMarch 26, 2014 at 9:15 AM

      Thanks for the info Tanvir, Kiska hai yeh fir?
      Sher mein naam to Ghalib kaa hi hai..

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    2. AnonymousMay 30, 2014 at 11:43 AM

      This is some amateur poet and not Ghalib.

      With a similar radeef (nahiN raha), Ghalib only has one ghazal in Deewan-e-Ghalib. This has been sung beautifully by Mehdi Hassan.

      Arz-e-niaz-e-ishq kay qabil nahiN raha
      Jis dil peh naaz tha mujhe woh dil nahiN raha

      Marnay kee aye dil aur hee tadbeer kar keh meiN
      Shayaan-e-dast-o-bazoo-e-qaatil nahiN raha

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  2. puneetJune 4, 2014 at 9:11 AM

    Thanks for the beautiful lines Fawad. So the lines I wrote have been written by a little known poet who used Ghalib's name.
    I'll have to hear the Mehdi Hassan version..

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